The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the
number
of people who were
emigrated from England to five various countries during four Unnecessary verb
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years
(2004 to 2007). It is evident that,
Australia was their most favourite destination. Remove the comma
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However
, New Zealand and America were less popular.
According to
the data, around 40 thousand
people travelled to Australia in 2004 and 2005. Their number
skyrocketed to more than 50 thousand
in 2006, which was the highest compared to the other years
and nations. Followed by a little drop in 2007.
The second selected country was Spain with more than 30 thousand
passengers from 2004 to 2006. In 2007 this
country saw a slight decrease, and less than 30 thousand
travelled to Spain.
New Zealand and the USA had approximately the same number
of visitors in the four mentioned years
. Around 20 thousand
British citizens had chosen these two countries as their destination. However
, America hosted less than 20 thousand
emigrants in 2005.
France had a few number
of travellers at the outset of the period, but their number
doubled in 2005 and reached more than 30 thousand
, but it experienced a significant decrease in the number
of visitors in the next two years
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