MamadjonovSamandar: The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart illustrates the number of individuals from four countries going to Australia for an educational reason in ten years with two-year intervals from 1982 to 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
, in the first half of the record, Malaysian people tend to study abroad in Australia
while
Indonesians surpass in the second half.
Moreover
, Hong Kong and Singapore citizens mostly came in final place.
To begin
with, the total of Malaysian students was 3,000 and dramatically increased to roughly 6,000 in 1983 before hovering at
this
level until 1990 and oscillating to end the record at 16,000.
Furthermore
, Indonesians began at 0 in the first year and surged to a gigantic 27,000 in 1998
as well as
swinging to 24,000 in 2000. What is interesting to note is both of them had the same number of students around 1994.
Additionally
, The volume of Hong Kong and Malaysia learners was 0 until 1987 when both of them started to
further
widen. Hong Kong soared to reach its peak in 1997 and varied to 17,000 in the
last
year.
Finally
, a rocket up was seen in a Singapore trend and ended at approximately 20,000. What is surprising to see is they came across each other in the year 1998.
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