The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The two diagrams compare the alternative employment status of people who completed graduate school to those who pursued higher
education
in the UK for the year 2008, it is worth noticing that these data did not take into consideration the full-time job sector.
Overall
, it is apparent that the numbers of the two groups are strikingly different, where there were roughly over 1500 unemployed people who hold postgraduate degrees, the number was ten times more for those with only a college education
, reaching 16000. Furthermore
, nearly 30000 of
graduate students choose to continue their Change preposition
apply
education
, compared to less than 3000 of the postgraduate group. in addition
to that, working part-time comes as a second favored
option next to Change the spelling
favoured
the
Correct article usage
apply
further
education
choice. In contrast
, volunteering compromised the least pursued path in both demographics,
in conclusion, it is evident that the majority of people who did not get a full time
job are usually seeking Add a hyphen
full-time
further
education
regardless of their current education
level.Submitted by maryamansour11 on
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