The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
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bar chart illustrates the percentage of British people spending
money
on
charity
based on their age within a period of 20 years, commencing from 1990.
Overall
,the highest rate of age for giving
money
to
charity
can be observed from 36 to 50 in 1990
while
the opposite can be seen for 18-25 in 2010. At the beginning of the period, the percentage of 18-25 was over 15% in 1990
then
this
number increased moderately to get to 42 per cent for ages f36-50.
moreover
, for the other two categories from 51 to above 65 can be seen the same amount above 30
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in 1990 and
this
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was nearly 38 per cent in 2010. In 1990, those aged
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18-50 had more tendency to spend
money
on
charity
in comparison with 2010.
Although
the lowest rate of spending
money
in 2010 can be seen from 18 to 25, the highest rate of giving
money
to
charity
can be in 51-65age.
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