Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say how important New Year is to people in your country • describe how New Year is celebrated in your country • explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your country
Dear Micheal
I hope
,
Remove the comma
apply
this
is my letter useful for
you.
New Change preposition
to
Year
is widely celebrated in my country. New Year
's Eve is everywhere and it affects people differently. Everyone wishes and dreams in New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
. Again, they expect gift
from Add an article
a gift
Santa
Claus
. I guess, New
Correct article usage
the New
Year
is important for people because there are silver lining
in the New Fix the agreement mistake
linings
Year
.
Various festivals and celebrations are held in the New Year
. Of cource
, fireworks too. Correct your spelling
course
Everwhere
is decorated. The main thing is that New Correct your spelling
Everywhere
Year
doesn't pass without ''Olivia'' salad. Delicous
foods are cooked too. Like what, our national foods and others. New Correct your spelling
Delicious
Year
comes at 00.00 o'clock. Everyone welcomes the New Year
in the family circle. It's really attractive.
What I like the most about the New Year
is forget
the events of the old Wrong verb form
forgetting
year
and step
into Wrong verb form
stepping
new
life. But I like taking gifts more. Every New Correct article usage
a new
Year
's morning I wait
gifts from Add the preposition
wait for
Santa
Claus
. Because I trust Santa
Claus
. I think, most people believe Santa
Claus
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coherence
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cohesion
Ensure that all sentences are logically connected and that there is a smooth flow of ideas from one sentence to the next.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task clearly, including the importance of New Year, its celebration, and what you specifically enjoy about it.
task achievement
The letter has a friendly and appropriate tone, which suits the context of writing to a friend.
coherence
You have a friendly and clear opening and closing to your letter, which are very appropriate for the task.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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