The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graphic gives us information about the changes
of
price by month of nickel, zinc and Change preposition
in
cooper
during 2014.
Correct your spelling
copper
Overall
, nickel started with the highest Linking Words
percentage
and finished with the lowest.
Zinc Use synonyms
begun
with the Add the auxiliary verb
began
least
Correct word choice
lowest
percentage
and finished with the greatest. the changes in the price of Use synonyms
cooper
were not significant during the year.
In January, nickel had started Capitalize word
Cooper
with
6% but, the prices went low until March Change preposition
at
with
1%, the prices decreased Change preposition
at
significatively
from May to June until -3 %, Correct your spelling
significantly
then
in July the Linking Words
percentage
increased to -1% and it remained stable until October and recovered during November and December with 1%.
Zing started with the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
in January (1%), in February it went up to 3%, Use synonyms
then
went down until June with -1% and remained stable until October when increased the price reaching 2% in December.
Cooper Linking Words
begun
Add the auxiliary verb
began
with
2%, the prices came down until May Change preposition
at
then
briefly increased to June and remained stable until October, Linking Words
then
the Linking Words
percentage
steadily recovered and reached 2% in December.Use synonyms
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