The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
The chart below illustrates the percentage of British
people
giving money to charity by age
range for the years 1990 and 2010.
To commence with , overall
a greater percentage of people
gave money to charity in 1990 than in 2010 except for the people
who were over 50 years old. It is worth noticing that, elder people
donated more to charity than their younger counterparts.
In 1990, 42% of the 36-50 age
group in Britain made charitable donations, and this
figure is the highest on the chart. The 18-25s contributed the least at only 17%. By 2010, these figures had fallen significantly to 35% and 7% respectively. The level of donations from the 26-35 age
group also
experienced a decrease in 2010 from 31% to 24%.
While
donations up to the age
of 50 declined across the two years, they rose among the 51-65 age
group from 35% to nearly 40%, which was the highest percentage for 2010. The figure for the over 65s was lower than this
, at 35% but it was still a little higher than the 1990's figure of 32%.Submitted by oshin.ambekar5 on
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