The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
tea
and
coffee
imported by China, the UK, the USA, and
Canada
in 2007, measured in
tonnes
.
Overall
,
tea
was the most imported beverage in three out of the four countries, with the exception of
Canada
, where
coffee
was preferred. The UK imported the least amount of
coffee
,
whereas
Canada
imported the least
tea
. In the UK,
tea
imports were the highest at around 16,000
tonnes
,
while
coffee
imports were approximately 4,000
tonnes
, the lowest among the four countries. The USA imported over 8,000
tonnes
of
tea
and about 6,000
tonnes
of
coffee
.
Similarly
, Germany (which should be replaced with
Canada
for accuracy) imported 6,000
tonnes
of
tea
and slightly over 4,000
tonnes
of
coffee
.
In contrast
,
Canada
imported a higher amount of
coffee
at 8,000
tonnes
, compared to about 4,000
tonnes
of
tea
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • import/export
  • commodity
  • metric tons
  • comparative
  • trend
  • data
  • statistics
  • significant
  • notable
  • figure
  • country-specific
  • bulk
  • graph/chart
  • depict
  • illustrate
  • fluctuate
  • dominant
  • minor
  • contrast
  • analyze
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