The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of
tea
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and
coffee
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imported by China, the UK, the USA, and
Canada
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in 2007, measured in
tonnes
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.
Overall
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,
tea
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was the most imported beverage in three out of the four countries, with the exception of
Canada
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, where
coffee
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was preferred. The UK imported the least amount of
coffee
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,
whereas
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Canada
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imported the least
tea
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. In the UK,
tea
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imports were the highest at around 16,000
tonnes
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,
while
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coffee
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imports were approximately 4,000
tonnes
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, the lowest among the four countries. The USA imported over 8,000
tonnes
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of
tea
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and about 6,000
tonnes
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of
coffee
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.
Similarly
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, Germany (which should be replaced with
Canada
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for accuracy) imported 6,000
tonnes
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of
tea
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and slightly over 4,000
tonnes
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of
coffee
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.
In contrast
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,
Canada
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imported a higher amount of
coffee
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at 8,000
tonnes
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, compared to about 4,000
tonnes
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of
tea
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • import/export
  • commodity
  • metric tons
  • comparative
  • trend
  • data
  • statistics
  • significant
  • notable
  • figure
  • country-specific
  • bulk
  • graph/chart
  • depict
  • illustrate
  • fluctuate
  • dominant
  • minor
  • contrast
  • analyze
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