The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
tea
and coffee
imported by China, the UK, the USA, and Canada
in 2007, measured in tonnes
.
Overall
, tea
was the most imported beverage in three out of the four countries, with the exception of Canada
, where coffee
was preferred. The UK imported the least amount of coffee
, whereas
Canada
imported the least tea
.
In the UK, tea
imports were the highest at around 16,000 tonnes
, while
coffee
imports were approximately 4,000 tonnes
, the lowest among the four countries. The USA imported over 8,000 tonnes
of tea
and about 6,000 tonnes
of coffee
. Similarly
, Germany (which should be replaced with Canada
for accuracy) imported 6,000 tonnes
of tea
and slightly over 4,000 tonnes
of coffee
.
In contrast
, Canada
imported a higher amount of coffee
at 8,000 tonnes
, compared to about 4,000 tonnes
of tea
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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