The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given figure describes the steps involved in the
production
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of
sugar
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from sugarcane. The process involves several steps, including harvesting, crushing, syruping, centrifugation, and
finally
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drying and cooling.
Overall
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,
sugar
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cane goes through seven stages and two main versions of
sugar
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production
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.
Sugar
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production
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begins with the cultivation of
sugar
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cane and ends with drying and cooling As shown in the diagram, sugarcane plants are ready for processing when they grow to the required stage, and the first step in
production
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begins with harvesting, which can be done manually or by machine. After that, the harvested sugarcane is crushed by crushing machines to extract juice, which is
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purified through a filter containing limestone. The purified juice is
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heated in an evaporator to form a syrup from the original substance. The syrup is
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centrifuged to separate the
sugar
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crystals from the syrup. The final stage of
sugar
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production
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is the drying and cooling of the almost finished product in special containers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, sugar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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