Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligent than human beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In contemporary societies,

according to

the dominance of advanced

computers

in intelligence compared to humans, there has been a belief that

this

will bring about positive changes,

while

others are concerned about the blurry future of humans.

This

essay firmly believes that it is

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for human civilization on account of job displacement and loss of social relationships, despite those who assume that the quality of life could be improved. It is essential to acknowledge that the more advanced technologies are applied to communities, the more

people

are unemployed.

In other words

, innovations,

such

as

computers

, can control and manage the work with extreme accuracy and speed.

Furthermore

, with too much dependency on

technologies

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,

people

are lacking

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logical thinking and practical experience, leading to an increase in unemployment rates.

As a consequence

, futuristic

computers

will replace the excessive number of

people

who lack professional skills and work ineffectively, contributing to many social tensions. Take the USA as a pertinent example, where almost 80% of production is based on automation lines, replacing

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large number of employees. Some critics,

however

, presume that by paralleling the development of

computers

, living conditions would be enhanced. They believe that in terms of society, high-tech

computers

can not only support

people

to make

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by utilizing them as automated managers, but they will

also

become the solutions for many social tensions and global issues,

such

as the

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gap or climate change.

This

point has credibility, yet the more popular

computers

will be in the future, the more dependent

people

will be, leading to a reduction in human intelligence and creativity. In

this

situation, communities will disappear and be replaced by robotic dominance. From

this

writer’s perspective, social interaction is becoming wider and wider

as a result

of the introduction of high-tech mechanics, and more specifically,

computers

.

This

is because,

due to

the convenience of

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or chatting apps

such

as Messenger or Facebook,

people

, especially young generations, will use them to have

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online-based

conversation

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, contributing to the loss of communicative skills and self-confidence. With

this

in mind, many young

people

who are introverts will definitely spend their time on

computers

to confidently express ideas and concepts, resulting in the forgetfulness of their mother tongue and natural accent.

Hence

, a more intelligent future computer can break down human relationships and other practical skills.

Thus

, the possible impact of occupation replacement and the lack of communal interaction need to be considered.

Therefore

, it should have been demonstrated that it is

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for humans to develop the level of

computers

without any consideration of controlling them.