The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the bar chart is information pertaining to the imported
coffee
and tea
in four various nations. The measurements were in tonnes
.
Overall
, it can be seen that UK
imported Correct article usage
the UK
tea
the most rather than coffee
. In addition
, Canada and US
had the same figures for the amount of both Correct article usage
the US
tea
and coffee
.
Looking at the figures in UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
tea
accounted for exactly 80 thousand
tonnes
which was widely higher than in
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coffee
over two times by
30 Change preposition
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thousand
tonnes
. In Germany, coffee
stayed at 50 thousand
tonnes
, where
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whereas
the
imported Correct article usage
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tea
just accounted for approximately 41 thousand
tonnes
lower compared to coffee
.
Moving onto the Canada and US where they almost imported tea
and coffee
at
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of
thousand
and 40 thousand
tonnes
respectively. However
, the figure for US
was quite higher than in Canada by roughly one Correct article usage
the US
thousand
tonnes
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