The chart below shows the total number of hours per month from 1980 to 2015 that people in the USA used modern technology divided into four categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of hours per month from 1980 to 2015 that people in the USA used modern technology divided into four categories. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the amount of the length of trips made by minors who are 5-15 years old in six different methods in six years with ten-year intervals from 1970 to 2020.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the younger generations mostly take
bus
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the bus
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during their travel and they are not interested in
taxi
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taxis
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and walking.
To begin
with, the total of the average bus trip length started from a massive 28 and inclined to a gigantic 37 in 2020
while
the cycling method which was a massive 28 in 1970 dramatically declined to 17 in the
last
year of record. A noticeable swing was seen in the car which started from exactly 20, ending at an enormous 27 in 2020. What is interesting to note is that both bus and cycling methods in 2020 were different by roughly 2 times.
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, the train length in the year 1970 registered 16 and oscillated throughout the period before arriving at 22
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2020. Taxi and walking, which were a minuscule 5 and a nominal 16 in the early year, significantly varied and ended at 20 and a tiny 8 respectively. What is surprising to see is that the difference between taxi and walking was about 2.5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • modern technology
  • significant increase
  • notable milestone
  • growth rate
  • usage patterns
  • comparative analysis
  • fluctuations
  • exponential growth
  • steady rise
  • decline
  • peak
  • trend
  • data analysis
  • overall trend
  • compared to
  • demonstrate
  • illustrate
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