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The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.
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The following bar chart represents information collated from International Passenger survey about the British emigration headed to five different destinations:
Australia
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,
Spain
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, New
Zealand
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, USA, and
France
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, between 2004 and 2007, indicated as thousand
peoples
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.
Overall
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, it can be clearly observed that
Australia
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 was by far the most popular nations that British
peoples
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 opted for,
whereas
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 that of its neighbourhood: New
Zealand
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, was the least favourite destination.
However
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, it is interesting to note that the trends of Britain emigration experienced a fluctuate slope except that of in
Spain
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 and New
Zealand
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 that underwent a downward trend throughout the given time frame.
To begin
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 with, in 2004 and 2005, at arounf 41 thousand british tourists travelled to
Australia
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 the greatest among the other four countries, followed by
Spain
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, at approximately 35 thousands
peoples
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 in 2004. The number of English people headed to New
Zealand
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 and the states at the same rate of 23 thousand
peoples
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, whilst that of to
France
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 was about 2 thousands people behind.
Moreover
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, similar figures of the aforementioned countries with a slight drop about 1-2 thousands each in next year.
Hence
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, that of heading to
France
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 spurted to the same number as to
Spain
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 and outnumbered New
zealand
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 and America. In regards with, in 2006 and 2007, it can be clearly seen that the number of traveller to
Australia
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 and
Spain
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 remained at its first two top ranked nations, followed by the states at it fourth ranked.
Moreover
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, in 2007, it is obvious to inspected that people seems to gain its popularity more which making
France
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 to the bottom list.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, spain, zealand, france, peoples with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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