The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the facilities of a major university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The above bar graph illustrates faculties of a prominent university based on gender representation as academic
staff
percentage.
Overall
, the Engineering and Education departments depict dramatic variations compared to the rest. However
, Medicine remains outperformed due to
its equal proportion of male and female staff
.
To begin
with, Arts has more female staff
than male with a percentage of 55 and 45 respectively. Second comes Business with a significant difference in male ratio to female. Likewise
, Education and Engineering also
show a similar trend as Business due to
their discernible variation. Unlike both, Education has more female teaching staff
than male with a difference of 55 per cent
. Law has 60 per cent
of male faculties and 40 per cent
of female faculties, which is similar in the case of science as well with a proportion of males around 63 per cent
and females around 38%. In contrast
, medicine is the only field which exhibits equal gender contribution of around 45 per cent
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