The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar illustrates the
numbers
of Use synonyms
tea
and coffee Use synonyms
Correct pronoun usage
that comes
comes
from Correct subject-verb agreement
come
Canada
, The US, The Use synonyms
UK
,and Germany.
In the beginning,the Use synonyms
tea
imported to The Use synonyms
UK
has the highest Use synonyms
amount
of these four countries which show 4 times from Use synonyms
Canada
and The US.The Use synonyms
amount
of teas imported to The Use synonyms
UK
is 80000 Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
apply
Tonnes
.Use synonyms
Secondly
, the Linking Words
tea
imported to Germany only shows the Use synonyms
half
Correct word choice
apply
amounts
of Fix the agreement mistake
amount
tea
to The Use synonyms
UK
which only imported 40000 in Use synonyms
Tonnes
. The graph shows the same Use synonyms
numbers
of Use synonyms
tea
Use synonyms
import
in The US and Fix the agreement mistake
imports
Canada
. The Use synonyms
Use synonyms
numbers
is 20000.
Talking about Fix the agreement mistake
number
Caffee
in these 4 countries,the imported Correct your spelling
Coffee
amount
of coffee is totally different from Use synonyms
tea
. In Germany,coffee has 50000 in Use synonyms
Tonnes
which is the highest in these 4 countries. The US and Use synonyms
Canada
Use synonyms
illustrates
the same Change the verb form
illustrate
numbers
of imported Use synonyms
caffee
which is 4000 Correct your spelling
coffee
in
Change preposition
apply
Tonnes
. The lowest Use synonyms
amount
is The Use synonyms
UK
thatUse synonyms
caffee
imported to the Correct your spelling
coffee
UK
only 30000 in Use synonyms
Tonnes
.Use synonyms
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