The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar illustrates the
numbers
of tea
and coffee Correct pronoun usage
that comes
comes
from Correct subject-verb agreement
come
Canada
, The US, The UK
,and Germany.
In the beginning,the tea
imported to The UK
has the highest amount
of these four countries which show 4 times from Canada
and The US.The amount
of teas imported to The UK
is 80000 in
Change preposition
apply
Tonnes
.Secondly
, the tea
imported to Germany only shows the half
Correct word choice
apply
amounts
of Fix the agreement mistake
amount
tea
to The UK
which only imported 40000 in Tonnes
. The graph shows the same numbers
of tea
import
in The US and Fix the agreement mistake
imports
Canada
. The numbers
is 20000.
Talking about Fix the agreement mistake
number
Caffee
in these 4 countries,the imported Correct your spelling
Coffee
amount
of coffee is totally different from tea
. In Germany,coffee has 50000 in Tonnes
which is the highest in these 4 countries. The US and Canada
illustrates
the same Change the verb form
illustrate
numbers
of imported caffee
which is 4000 Correct your spelling
coffee
in
Change preposition
apply
Tonnes
. The lowest amount
is The UK
that caffee
imported to the Correct your spelling
coffee
UK
only 30000 in Tonnes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words numbers, tea, canada, uk, amount, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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