You were advised by your doctor that you need to do more physical exercises. Write a letter to your friend asking him to join you. Why you want to do physical exercise. What type of physical exercises you are planning to do? Why do you want your friend to join you?
Dear Pur,
I hope
this
letter finds you in a
great health. Remove the article
apply
long
time no see brother, Capitalize word
Long
i
really miss doing physical exercises Change the capitalization
I
togetether
at your house. please say Correct your spelling
together
hallo
in your Correct your spelling
hello
parents
hospitality which Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
unforgottable
. Correct your spelling
unforgettable
i
am writing to inform you that Change the capitalization
I
i
have gone to Change the capitalization
I
hospital
for Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
medical
Correct article usage
a medical
check up
because currenly i always feel Add a hyphen
check-up
erly
Correct your spelling
extremely
exhaused
. Correct your spelling
exhausted
Morever
, Correct your spelling
Moreover
doctor
Correct article usage
the doctor
sugget
me for doing physical exercises.
as you know as far as Correct your spelling
suggest
suggested
i
have Change the capitalization
I
Correct article usage
a disiase
disiase
Correct your spelling
disease
Correct pronoun usage
that make
make
my body Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
not be able doing
hard work. Verb problem
unable to do
furthemore
doctor Correct your spelling
Furthermore
advise
to me Wrong verb form
advised
for
decrease Change preposition
apply
a
fat and do Change the word
my
diet
routine.
during Correct article usage
a diet
this
mount i
have estimated several Change the capitalization
I
exercise
Change to a plural noun
exercises
for
reduce Change preposition
to
Correct article usage
the disiase
disiase
Correct your spelling
disease
i
would like prefare Change the capitalization
I
such
as jogging on Correct article usage
a tradmil
tradmil
and Correct your spelling
treadmill
treadmills
lift
iron for good muscle.
Wrong verb form
lifting
i
believe you can teach me because you have Change the capitalization
I
numerouse
Correct your spelling
numerous
exerience
. Correct your spelling
experience
moreover
you have Add a comma
moreover,
equipment
Correct article usage
the equipment
for
Change preposition
to
advise
me more.
thank you so much for your attention i Change the verb form
advising
wish
Verb problem
hope
this
is
will be Unnecessary verb
apply
tranning
magnificent exercise with you.
all the best,
Correct your spelling
a
habib
.Change the capitalization
Habib
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task achievement
To improve Task Achievement, make sure you fully address each part of the prompt. Clarify your reasons for wanting your friend to join you and include more details about the kinds of exercises you plan to do.
coherence cohesion
For better Coherence and Cohesion, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea and that ideas are logically connected. Use more transition words to guide the reader smoothly from one point to the next.
general
To improve language accuracy, pay attention to grammar and spelling errors. This will also enhance overall readability and coherence.
task achievement
The letter has a friendly and engaging tone, which makes it suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and closing are present and appropriately set the tone for the letter.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.