The chart and table below give information about toursits at a particular holiday resort in Australia.

The chart and table below give information about toursits at a particular holiday resort in Australia.
The chart and table deliver specific information about tourists from different kinds of places at a tourism
center
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in
Australia
.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the highest proportion of tourists from Europe are at resorts in
Australia
,
while
Asians make up the smallest amount. The table shows that Europeans stay longer than others,
while
Asians stay less than all categories of visitors. Looking at the details, Europeans make up
the
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large amount at 37%,
while
Asian humans accounted for 10% of the figure in terms of visiting
Australia
at a certain resort.
Hence
, 35% of the figure is occupied by Americans in terms of relaxing there. Europeans stay in
Australia
camping or caravaning for 16 days in order to be busy swimming or sunbathing. When it comes to Asians, those who temporarily live for 7 days in the most popular accommodation in
Australia
can enjoy sightseeing during that period.
However
, American visitors can have a rest for 14 days in
Australia
in a 4-star hotel in order to inspire sightseeing.
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