You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts
illustrates
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It support and current
hours
for
full
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full-time
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time
and
part-
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part-time
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time
student
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students
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in
university
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the university
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library .
Overall
, the highest percentage of common
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part -
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part-time
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time
student
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students
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while
the opposite can be observed for
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time
student
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students
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in
this
categories
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category
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. The current
hours
for part-
time
student
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students
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accounted for 72%
while
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for
full
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time
student
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students
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was 67% and the percentage of
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quiet
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for part-
time
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was arround
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arround
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around
22% per
hours
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hour
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which
10
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is 10
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% lower than
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in other categories.
moreover
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, a
majoritey
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majority
of people have the best feel with It support for
full
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full-time
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time
student
around 55%
whereas
just over one fifth have
same
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interest about
support
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it for
part-
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a part-time
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time
student
.
furthermore
, the
propotion
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proportion
of those feel happy in the It
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were quite similar for
part-
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time
and
full
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full-time
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time
student
32% and 35% respectively. a
minirity
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minimum
of
full
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time
student
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students
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not
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do not
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spend any
time
in it
center
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the same amount can be seen for
part
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part-time
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time
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per
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, time, student with synonyms.
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