Water pollution has become an increasing problem over the past few decades. What causes water pollution? How can we prevent this problem?

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contamination has been increasing over the past few years. There are some factors why

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has happened, and I assume that there are some possible

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to solve

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issue. There are several contributing factors

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become

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polluted. The main cause of

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issue is that

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the import and export industries do their shipping through the oceans by enormous cargo

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to reduce their costs.

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consume great

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of petrol and evacuate their

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wastes

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directly to the sea.

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, a dangerous amount of oil and contamination

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into the sea and puts the marine species life at risk. Another major cause to blame is the factories, which leave

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wastes

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of their production process into the rivers. Most of the time the factories’

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consist of chemical and

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materials, and they might contaminate a river which runs through a city or village. If people used contaminated

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by accident, their health would be in great danger.

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, I believe that some measures could be taken by the government to tackle

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pollution problem.

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, the government should

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on

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the trading businesses in order to limit the number of their cargo

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. The state should support the local markets to produce more and decrease their

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goods.

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, the ocean could be cleaner when the number of cargo

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decreased.

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, Some

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laws must be

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by the

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government

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to prevent

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waste evacuation

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industry

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areas. The

wastes

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which are collected by the industry units should

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to recycling plants in order to purify or destroy

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of releasing

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. In conclusion, there are many factors

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as trading

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and factories’

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which

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pollution,

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the government could solve

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issue by addressing some solutions.