The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The provided diagram indicates the causes of
reducing
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in
land
used for agriculture,
whereas
, the table represents the effects of these reasons on different sections in
1990s
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.
Overall
,
deforestion
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deforestation
,
over-cultivation
and over-grazing were the serious problems with grazing
accounted
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for the most.
Moreover
,
grazing
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the grazing
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issue
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, in Oceania, posed a major threat to agriculture,
by
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contrast with the threatened level of
over-cultivation
. Beginning with the pie chart representing
root
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reasons
of
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for
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land
degradation all around the world. It is evident that over-grazing had 35%, below
this
level, damage caused by deforestation was more than
over-cultivation
at 30% and 28%. The remaining adverse factors accounted for a tiny fraction of 7% in total. Turning to the table, regarding North America,
ony
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only
0,7% of
land
was
degradated
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degraded
by deforestation,
while
, these numbers were 3,3% and 1,5% in
over-cultivation
anf
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and
over-grazing, respectively. In Europe, 3 categories ranged from 5,5% to 9,8% of
land
which were 23% in total. Looking at the percentage of Ocenian with
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aggregate of 13%,
this
data was contributed mostly by 11,3% of
land
from grazing and 1,7% from destroyed forest.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, over-cultivation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Deforestation
  • Over-cultivation
  • Overgrazing
  • Soil erosion
  • Nutrient depletion
  • Land degradation
  • Soil compaction
  • Fertility
  • Preventive measures
  • Sustainable farming practices
  • Environmental impact
  • Economic implications
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