The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

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the information about how British

students

commuting

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to school.

Overall

, it can be seen that as the

distance

get

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further

,

students

tend to change from walking to commuting by bus.

Additionally

, none of the young learners choose to walk

as well as

ride

the

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a

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bike at

the

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distance

of over 5

miles

.

According to

the clean vehicles where there

is

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no

students

participate

in

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at over 5

miles

. As for walking,

while

the 1-2

miles

doubled the 2-5 one in student’s choices (exactly 60%), it is only

being

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a

three quarter

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of the 0-1

miles

. Meanwhile,

biker

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bikers

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made up

at

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merely 50% of

students

at 0-1 and 2-5

miles

which is nearly half of the 1-2 mile

distance

. Moving onto the

the

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remaining vehicles where there is a big

discreprancy

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discrepancy

in

students

commuting by bus with the range of

apporxiamtely

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approximately

70% and more than 0% between 0-1 and over 5

miles

, respectively.

Furthermore

, 5 times more

students

go by bus at 2-5

miles

, compared to 10% of the

students

in 1-2

miles

. In terms of

car

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cars

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, those who chose

this

vehicle for 0-1

miles

comprised

of

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around 10% which is a third of 2-5

miles

,

while

there is a minor difference from 20-21% at the

distance

of 1-2 and over 5

miles

.