The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
The given bar chart
illustrate
the information about how British Change the verb form
illustrates
students
Use synonyms
commuting
to school.
Wrong verb form
commute
Overall
, it can be seen that as the Linking Words
distance
Use synonyms
get
Change the verb form
gets
further
, Linking Words
students
tend to change from walking to commuting by bus. Use synonyms
Additionally
, none of the young learners choose to walk Linking Words
as well as
ride Linking Words
the
bike at Correct article usage
a
the
Correct article usage
a
distance
of over 5 Use synonyms
miles
.
Use synonyms
According to
the clean vehicles where there Linking Words
is
no Change the verb form
are
students
participate Use synonyms
in
at over 5 Change preposition
apply
miles
. As for walking, Use synonyms
while
the 1-2 Linking Words
miles
doubled the 2-5 one in student’s choices (exactly 60%), it is only Use synonyms
being
a Unnecessary verb
apply
three quarter
of the 0-1 Add a hyphen
three-quarter
miles
. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
biker
made up Fix the agreement mistake
bikers
at
merely 50% of Change preposition
apply
students
at 0-1 and 2-5 Use synonyms
miles
which is nearly half of the 1-2 mile Use synonyms
distance
.
Moving onto the Use synonyms
the
remaining vehicles where there is a big Remove the redundancy
apply
discreprancy
in Correct your spelling
discrepancy
students
commuting by bus with the range of Use synonyms
apporxiamtely
70% and more than 0% between 0-1 and over 5 Correct your spelling
approximately
miles
, respectively. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, 5 times more Linking Words
students
go by bus at 2-5 Use synonyms
miles
, compared to 10% of the Use synonyms
students
in 1-2 Use synonyms
miles
. In terms of Use synonyms
car
, those who chose Fix the agreement mistake
cars
this
vehicle for 0-1 Linking Words
miles
comprised Use synonyms
of
around 10% which is a third of 2-5 Change preposition
apply
miles
, Use synonyms
while
there is a minor difference from 20-21% at the Linking Words
distance
of 1-2 and over 5 Use synonyms
miles
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, distance, miles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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