The chart below gives information about the journeys to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how children aged 11 to 16 in the UK commuted to school in a year.
Overall
, the majority of children chose to walk or cycle for journeys
that were 2 miles or shorter while
buses
were the most common options for those who traveled
longer distances.
Regarding commutes under 1 mile, walking accounted for 90% of Change the spelling
travelled
such
journeys
, surpassing the figure for bicycles by 40%. Cars
and buses
were less favored
for Change the spelling
favoured
this
distance, each accounting for less than 10% of total journeys
. In the 1-2-mile range, cycling emerged as the most popular choice, making up approximately 75% of total journeys
. 60% of journeys
in this
category belonged to those who walked, triple the figure for cars
and six times as high as that for buses
.
Concerning journeys
within the 2-to-5-mile range, buses
took the lead with 50%, closely followed by bicycles at about 47%. Coming in third and fourth place were cars
and walking, at approximately 31% and 25% respectively. Moving onto commutes over 5 miles, buses
remained the preferred choice, with around 70%, followed by cars
at 21%, while
walking and cycling were not chosen for this
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