The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives a detailed breakdown in metric
oodles
of how much
fish
was caught locally and how much was imported over a ten-year period in Perth, Australia. There was a considerably larger volume of locally caught
fish
than imported
fish
over the entire period.
This
volume of locally caught
fish
increased dramatically in the first four years before peaking in 2008 at 8136.2 metric
oodles
and
then
decreasing every year after that,
although
it did recover slightly in the final year to 5031.9
oodles
. With regards to levels of imported
fish
, there was much more fluctuation than with locally caught, ranging from 231.6
oodles
in 2005 to 1227.3
oodles
in 2012.
However
, the
overall
trend shows an increase over the period with considerably more
fish
being supplied internationally.
Overall
, we can see that Perth was not very reliant on imported
fish
and was able to provide a large amount domestically. When looking at total volumes of
fish
, we can see that amounts increased until 2009 and
then
dropped off.
However
, Perth seems to be more reliant on
fish
imports than in the past.
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