The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures illustrate the the Monarch butterfly's life cycle from laying small eggs and mating with each other.
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it is clear that
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there are four main stages comprising egg, larval, pupal and adult.
To begin
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with, a number of circular-shaped eggs are laid on a milkweed leaf in a line pattern. After taking 14 days, a newborn larva hatches from the egg and it will live and feed on that milkweed tree until grows into a caterpillar;
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, it
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tries to hang itself. What is interesting to note is these
larvas
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hang upside down in the
last
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stage
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of larval.
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, it hangs itself and is covered by its own substances, in
this
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stage
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is the so-called "chrysalia" which takes around 10 days before emerging to an adult form which in turn migrates to
south
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and spends its life there for roughly 6 months, growing into an adult
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.
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, in the final
stage
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, they will fly north and mate with their partner in order to lay eggs and the cycle will start all over again. What is surprising to see is that they are mating by turning their back to each other.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life cycle
  • Monarch butterfly
  • eggs
  • milkweed plants
  • larvae
  • caterpillars
  • feed
  • chrysalis
  • pupa
  • metamorphosis
  • emerge
  • adult butterfly
  • repeat
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