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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
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The following illustrations
illustrates
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 the development of the London nearby city known as Chorleywood
village
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Village
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 in order to support the outburst of
populations
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population
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 between 1868 and 1994. The constructions added throughout the given time frame will be elaborated on in
detailed
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 in the next paragraph.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that in late 19th century period reached
it
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 maximum expansions with numerous
infractures
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infrastructures
 and public
transporations
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transportation
transportations
, whilst
that
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of in
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the early phase
was
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accounted for
small
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 area and two main roads.
To begin
 with, in 1868-1883, Chorleywood
village
 was only a small community situated next to the main road where its ending
intersect
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 with the other road.
However
, it is interesting to
noted
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 that the introduction of
railways
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 station in 1909 in the southern part of the
village
 where its rails passed through the city from East to West. With
this
 new form of
transportations
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, it attracted
number
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a number
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 of
peoples
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people
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 which
making
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made
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 its area
expanded
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expand
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 toward the south in 1883-1922. In
reagrds
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regard
with
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,
in
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1922-1970,
due to
 the
emerge
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 of railways station,
not
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 only
bring
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the
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 new means of transportation but
also
 the residents created
the
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communities near
by
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the station
in
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at
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 the bottom of the map.
Moreover
, in 1970,
a
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 express lane called Motor
way
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 was built
in
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1970, leading
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the
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 skyrocketed burst of populations living along
this
 long
fast track
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 lane in the East of the
village
.
Furthermore
, There
were
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also
 a park and golf course located in the central part of the map.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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