The chart and table below given information about tourist at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart and table compare the number of
tourists
from 4 distinct sectors to Use synonyms
Australia
, Use synonyms
while
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presented
information about Wrong verb form
presents
main
activity, accommodation and staying Add an article
the main
a main
in
here.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the most of Linking Words
tourists
come from Use synonyms
US
and the smallest indicate is from Asia. Correct article usage
the US
European
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tourists
stay the most Use synonyms
day
.
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days
According to
the chart, the number of Linking Words
Asian
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tourists
who come to Use synonyms
Australia
is at 10%. The biggest proportion of Use synonyms
visitors
to Use synonyms
Australia
is Use synonyms
at
37% from Europe. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, the percentage of US Linking Words
shows
nearly Verb problem
is
at
35% Change preposition
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while
individuals from other countries are about Linking Words
at
18%.
From the table, Change preposition
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European
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tourists
display the longest stay in Use synonyms
Australia
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approximetly
16 days. The second longest figure is about 14 Correct your spelling
approximately
day
from Fix the agreement mistake
days
American
people. Correct article usage
the American
Asian
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visitors
and other regions' Use synonyms
visitors
are almost the same, 7 and 10 days. In terms of accommodation, Use synonyms
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European
and other countries people prefer to stay Correct your spelling
Europe
at
camping and caravan during their travel to Change preposition
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Australia
. But Use synonyms
Asian
and American Use synonyms
visitors
choose to live in a 5-star hotel and Use synonyms
4-star
hotel, respectively. Correct article usage
a 4-star
Moreover
, Linking Words
Asian
and American people like sightseeing. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
European
Use synonyms
tourists
love to swim and Use synonyms
sunbath
in Correct your spelling
sunbathe
Australia
and Use synonyms
tourists
from other places like to do surfing as a main activity.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, australia, european, asian, visitors with synonyms.
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