The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a table illustrating the police budget for two years since 2017 in a certain region of Britain, which had an
overall
increase. Plus a chart showing information about changes in how the money is distributed in 2017 and 2018.
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according to
the table, apparently, the national government appreciate the police budget the most, accounting for 175.5m in 2017 and 177.8m in 2018 after a slight increase. Linking Words
Additionally
, the income from the source of local taxes grew the most, which was 91.2m in 2017 and 102.3m in 2018. Linking Words
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spent
on other sources remained briefly unchanged, which is 38m in 2017 and 28.5m in 2018.
Turning into the information of the destiny of government income, as shown by the pie diagrams. The percentage spent on buildings and transport remained the same at 17%, Replace the word
spending
while
that figure for technology almost doubled from 8% to 14%. Linking Words
Lastly
, the percentage of money for the salaries of officers and staff decreased by 6 per cent in 2018.Linking Words
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