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the maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment

the maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment
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Contained in the maps are the structure of an
office
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 building and options for its future
restruction
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restriction
destruction
Overall
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 , it can be seen that there are many changes in the
office
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 .
In addition
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, the right and left of
map
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the map
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was
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 replaced by the grass. In the present
office
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 building, four
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office
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offices
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 in the south
was
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were
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seperated
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separated
reported
 to both sides and made
it
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apply
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larger.
Susquently
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Subsequently
, the kitchen and canteen
destructed
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were destructed
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 to make a new
office
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 .
Additionally
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, the storeroom
was
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apply
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remained
unchange
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unchanged
 and a
WCs nexted
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WC next
 to the storeroom and grass. In the future
office
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 building, inside meeting areas more and more chart is seated in the right corner of
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the south-east
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south-east
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southeast
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 and the WCs
is
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are
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 projected to change the position.
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Furthermore
Futhermore
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Furthermore
,
a
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an
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 entrance
rebuild
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rebuilt
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 from
left
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the left
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 coming to
middle-bottom
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the middle-bottom
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words office with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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