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The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees.
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The diagram presents a
factory
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's layout for its
buildings
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 and housing for the staff.
Overall
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, the proposed setup ensures the
factory
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buildings
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 are strategically spaced so that work can go on unhindered and that the organization's personnel and families are nearby, yet far from the noise and busyness of the
factory
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 complex. As seen, the main industrial areas will be located at the
center
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 and the southeast corner of the land, possibly to minimize travel between
buildings
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. The central hub will contain an enclosed
area
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 for
factory
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buildings
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, which may be the key factories,
as well as
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 the main office and meeting
area
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. The remaining industrial
buildings
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 will be in an isolated patch in the southeast, far from the residential areas. A large parking
area
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 will be built to the northwest of the lot, possibly to prevent congestion in the places of work. Access to the
factory
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buildings
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 will be via the roundabout,
although
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 the entryway to the central facilities will only be through the east road.
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, nearly three-fourths of the
area
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 will contain residential areas for staff, ensuring workers can easily get home. There will be a large swimming pool in the northeastern portion of the land for recreation.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words factory, buildings, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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