The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees.
The diagram presents a
factory
's layout for its
buildings
and housing for the staff.
Overall
, the proposed setup ensures the
factory
buildings
are strategically spaced so that work can go on unhindered and that the organization's personnel and families are nearby, yet far from the noise and busyness of the
factory
complex. As seen, the main industrial areas will be located at the
center
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and the southeast corner of the land, possibly to minimize travel between
buildings
. The central hub will contain an enclosed
area
for
factory
buildings
, which may be the key factories,
as well as
the main office and meeting
area
. The remaining industrial
buildings
will be in an isolated patch in the southeast, far from the residential areas. A large parking
area
will be built to the northwest of the lot, possibly to prevent congestion in the places of work. Access to the
factory
buildings
will be via the roundabout,
although
the entryway to the central facilities will only be through the east road.
Furthermore
, nearly three-fourths of the
area
will contain residential areas for staff, ensuring workers can easily get home. There will be a large swimming pool in the northeastern portion of the land for recreation.
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