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The chart below shows the total number of minutes ( in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into 3 categories from 1995-2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes ( in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into 3 categories from 1995-2002.
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The bar chart illustrates the total quantity of
minutes
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 of calling by using
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telephone
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the telephone
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 in the United Kingdom with three different groups between 1995 and 2002. Units are measured in billions.
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, there was an increase in
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 total number of times called in mobiles, national and international groups over
7-year
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a 7-year
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 period. The
telephone
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 calls by locals witnessed a downward trend but they always had the highest figures in the period time. Looking at the local group, the number of
minutes
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 of
telephone
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 calls started at 72, after which it experienced a considerable increase to 90 billion
minutes
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 in 1999 and it was the highest figure
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during the years
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 there was a final drop to 72 in 2002. Moving to the figure for national and international, it began with 38, followed by a gradual growth to 61 billion in the
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 year of the period. The total amount of
minutes
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 for mobile
telephone
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 calls was 3 in 195, it slowly rose to 9
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 in 1998 but
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 witnessed a dramatic increase to 4 in the year 2002.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, telephone with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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