Some people say that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent to do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are several modern educational methods to support children

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a good grasp of depth knowledge

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to achieving comprehensive qualifications.

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, individuals believe that it is necessary to spend most

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on

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studying .

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completely

to

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opinion. On the one hand,

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teenagers

have the right and obligation to

study

, so they must

study

hard

within

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intense learning intensity.

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of their

time

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to their educational process.

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, their parents supply

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adequate

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living quality which

support

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to development of

teenagers

,

therefore

they need to get

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academic without distraction.

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,

students

study

in hectic curriculum, they can avoid temptation

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to guarantee high results in studying.

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,

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full-

time

in education for under

18-years

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18 years

old

students have

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numerous benefits.

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teenagers

can devote more

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to

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a wide range of

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,

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in depth

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knowledge

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to getting high

qualification

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qualifications

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academic

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in order to have lots of opportunities in

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their career

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career

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.

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thing not only

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students

get away

remote

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evils but

also

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advantage of

time

to

study

hard.

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,

while

students

have

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and invest a lot of

time

in studying, they will have more

time

to improve their

skill

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skills

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and enhance

knowledge

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their knowledge

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, leading to

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a high living quality. In conclusion, devoting full-

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to

educational

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curriculum has several positive

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on

teenagers

.

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to

develop

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developing

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individual abilities comprehensively and

avoid

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avoiding

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remote evils,

therefore

taking advantage when they are young is necessary

to

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young generations.