Some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make a difference, others say that individuals can protect the environment. Discuss both views, give your opinion.

A controversial discussion point is whether individuals’ actions have a profound impact on the protection of the

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or not.

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writer contends that

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solidarity among

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could create a difference

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their power to alter the current market. It is vital to acknowledge that consumers’

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would affect the market trend the most. By way of explanation, if

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signaled

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for the reduction of meat consumption on a large scale, it would fuel a dramatic decrease in the amount of livestock farming.

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, greenhouse

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emission

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emissions

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would be limited, contributing to better air quality.

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, the alteration of individuals’

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would emerge as an urgent signal for governments and corporations to take

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and imply potential policy, which may change the market

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and be beneficial to the

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developed and developing countries, there is a growing trend of using sustainable, eco-friendly products,

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of taking consumers’ preference from synonymous businesses,

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as Unilever. In another perspective, there are opposing views that highlight the need

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the

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on a more extensive scale. From

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point, they believe that environmental degradation would require more

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and systematic solutions to solve.

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urgent problem could ultimately be dwarfed by the positive impact of policies from local authorities and businesses,

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as implying punishments and

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people

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and industries heavily if they are caught doing

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harmful things to cause pollution.

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the writer’s personal viewpoint, I,

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, consider that every small step should be counted. If these actions multiplied through millions of

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, they would be a huge inspiration to other residents, even large nations, and become a thing that everyone would want to learn and imitate. In brief,

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some argue that the protection of the

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should be done on a larger scale, the writer thinks that individuals could make a big difference in

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