Fast food is becoming a part of life everywhere, negatively affecting ourlife styles and diets. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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food

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tranformating

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transformed

a

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major common

food

in entire the world, but it

take

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has affected

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our diets and

life styles

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lifestyles

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and lead

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lead

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to more negative. The opinion of

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writer

that

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fast

food

is not good for people life

styles

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lifestyles

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and diets. It is vital to understand that fast

food

have contained

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lots of salt, sugar and oil, it is not good if

human

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humans

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consume it too much. When the high salt intake our body is taken high

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blood pressure

and if

this

condition

continue

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, it will be dangerous. Moving onto sugar and oil, people will get diabetes if they eat

much

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of

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apply

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takeaway

food

.

However

, some suggest that everywhere

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can

easy to

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find fast

food

and they do not need to cook that so

convenient

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for their meal. It is visible that some

of

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families make a small event at fast

food

restaurants.

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, it

make

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a chance for someone who

need

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a

part time

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job.

This

point may be true but each of health’s individual is more important than everything. In conclusion, it can be seen that if

human

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humans

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consume

fastfood

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fast food

too much will not give any advantages. Fast

food

will take people closer

with

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to

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disease so

avoid

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avoiding

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junk

food

affecting

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apply

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positively for our

life styles

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lifestyles

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and diets.