The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart and table illustrate information about holiday resorts and
tourists
in Australia.
On the overall
trend, the highest number of visitors was in Europe 37%, moreover
, the lowest percentage was in Asia, just 10 per cent. Furthermore
, the highest pointer was 16 days
of the average length of stay by European tourists
, while
the lowest was 7 days
by Asian
travellers.
As the pie chart shows, the percentage of tourists
in Europe and in the US were almost the same 37% and 35%, and the smallest percentage of people were in Asia 10%. And in other regions
, this
point was 18 per cent.
The table shows any activities by tourists
from different countries. The biggest number average length of stay was 16 days
by European tourists
. American tourists
stayed for 14 days
. After that visitors from other regions
and Asian
tourists
stay 10 and 7 days
. The most popular accommodation was camping or caravan by tourists
from Europe and other regions
. And between Asian
and American tourists
it was 5-star and 4-star hotels. The main activity between Asian
and American travellers was almost the same, sightseeing. European tourists
prefer swimming, while
guests from other regions
prefer surfing.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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