The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart and table illustrate information about holiday resorts and
tourists
in Australia. On the
overall
trend, the highest number of visitors was in Europe 37%,
moreover
, the lowest percentage was in Asia, just 10 per cent.
Furthermore
, the highest pointer was 16
days
of the average length of stay by European
tourists
,
while
the lowest was 7
days
by
Asian
travellers. As the pie chart shows, the percentage of
tourists
in Europe and in the US were almost the same 37% and 35%, and the smallest percentage of people were in Asia 10%. And in other
regions
,
this
point was 18 per cent. The table shows any activities by
tourists
from different countries. The biggest number average length of stay was 16
days
by European
tourists
. American
tourists
stayed for 14
days
. After that visitors from other
regions
and
Asian
tourists
stay 10 and 7
days
. The most popular accommodation was camping or caravan by
tourists
from Europe and other
regions
. And between
Asian
and American
tourists
it was 5-star and 4-star hotels. The main activity between
Asian
and American travellers was almost the same, sightseeing. European
tourists
prefer swimming,
while
guests from other
regions
prefer surfing.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, days, asian, regions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • comparison
  • spike
  • drop
  • correlation
  • seasonal variation
  • demographics
  • tourist influx
  • resort
  • holidaymakers
  • visitor statistics
  • notable changes
  • fluctuation
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • peak season
  • off-peak season
  • international tourists
  • domestic tourists
  • external factors
  • economic conditions
  • political climate
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