Some people believe that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers instead of benefitting them individually. Do you agree or disagree

There are those who believe that guiding

children

to become

benefical

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beneficial

people for the community is the main goal of

school

instead

of catering for

individuals

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individual

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benefits. I totally agree with

this

point of view ,

due to

the moral

proplems

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problems

.

School

being

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is

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the mainstray

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mainstray

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mainstay

of

education

, which is tasked with turning

children

into

a well-behaved and well-infprmed citizens

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well-behaved and well-infprmed citizens

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.

Morover

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Moreover

, schools prioritize equipping

students

with

wide

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a wide

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range of knowledge, skills, and

attitude

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attitudes

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to achieve their future

goal

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goals

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. Since

children

spend their formative years at

school

,

this

will be the golden hours for

children

to

built

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their personality, so schools likely play an essential role in controlling and shaping the thoughts and

characteristic

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characteristics

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of youngsters.

Therefore

,

school

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schools

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need to instill

displince

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discipline

, morality and

intergrity

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integrity

in the future

generation

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generations

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.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, schools

ensures

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ensure

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the proper

traning

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training

to enable

children

to succeed in the job market. In the end,

the

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apply

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education

help

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helps

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people make a living

latter

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later

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in life,

while

it

also

provides

workforce

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a workforce

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for economic growth. How well

students

can contribute to society is a clear

evident

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evidence

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of

school's

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a school's

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success.

On the other hand

, leading

children

to access

with

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apply

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individualistic from

the

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a

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young age,

this

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apply

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would distort the core value of

education

. Heavy emphasis on individual demands can lead

students

to only pay attention to self-interest, whereby they become selfish. the improvement of

individualistic

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at

school

will turn the meaning of

education

into

commercial

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a commercial

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commidiy

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commodity

, where

students

can buy whatever benefit for their personal use. In these cases,

school

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schools

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would fail to realise their critical educational mission. In conclusion, the priority of

school

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schools

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should be educating

children

become

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to become

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useful workers for the community,

instead

of serving individuals' needs since it helps raise the awareness of controlling

behaviors

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behaviours

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.