The chart below shows the average cost of a monthly contract for 4 different mobiles in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.

The chart below shows the average cost of a monthly contract for 4 different mobiles in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.
The given line graph depicts the monthly cost for an average of four types of mobiles between January and September 2002 in a country in Europe. The figures were recorded in euro (
E
) . Generally speaking, it can be seen that the highest cost was in Domo from January to August, with Lex taking second place for the largest amount in
this
particular country. It can
also
be observed that the proportion experienced an increase over the time period, with the exception of Sim TX. Looking at the statistics in more detail , an upward trend of Domo and Lex could be noted. Domo faced a rise from approximately 15E at the beginning and peaked at 25E in July before decreasing moderately in the following months.
Similarly
, Lex started with roughly 12E in the first month,
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it fluctuated and remained constant from March to April at around 13E and rose slightly in the next month. Moving onto the remaining statistics, Sim TX started out with a slow increase of about 9E from 11E between January and May , after that, it reached a peak at 13E in June and showed a sharp decline to the end of the year.
By contrast
, Alpha went up slowly at the beginning before substantially jumping from 5E to 13E between June and August and peaked with the highest amount
at the end
of the year by 25E

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