The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map depicts a
library
plan between 2001 and 2009.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
library
had significant changes, in 2001
the
Capitalize word
The
show examples
library
had basic and fairly simple things, but with the passage of time, there has been more modern equipment.
To begin
with, in the south, the entrance, librarian's desk, and stairs remained at the same location in 2009 as they were not changed;
however
, there was a huge change in the west
side
of the
library
. In 2001, there were only self-help and history sections, but in 2009 the west
side
was expanded with the addition of 4 more sections, which were kitchen, economics, law, and fiction.
Besides
this
, computers were added in the southeast
section
of the
library
. On the east
side
of the
library
, there was a newspapers and periodicals
section
which was
then
replaced by films and dvd's in 2009.
Moreover
, there were 8 small tables in the middle of the
library
which were
also
replaced by large 4 tables in 2009, and the leftover space was converted to a children's area.
Also
, on the ground floor, the fiction
section
was moved to the west
side
of the
library
, and that whole place was converted into a children's book
section
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, side, section with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-service machines
  • computer stations
  • digital resources
  • book sections
  • fiction, non-fiction, reference
  • café area
  • repositioned
  • user preferences
  • management strategies
  • children's area
  • youth engagement
  • educational activities
  • meeting rooms
  • collaborative spaces
  • community events
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