The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given map depicts a
library
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plan between 2001 and 2009.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
library
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had significant changes, in 2001
the
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library
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had basic and fairly simple things, but with the passage of time, there has been more modern equipment.
To begin
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with, in the south, the entrance, librarian's desk, and stairs remained at the same location in 2009 as they were not changed;
however
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, there was a huge change in the west
side
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of the
library
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. In 2001, there were only self-help and history sections, but in 2009 the west
side
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was expanded with the addition of 4 more sections, which were kitchen, economics, law, and fiction.
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this
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, computers were added in the southeast
section
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of the
library
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. On the east
side
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of the
library
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, there was a newspapers and periodicals
section
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which was
then
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replaced by films and dvd's in 2009.
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, there were 8 small tables in the middle of the
library
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which were
also
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replaced by large 4 tables in 2009, and the leftover space was converted to a children's area.
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, on the ground floor, the fiction
section
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was moved to the west
side
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of the
library
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, and that whole place was converted into a children's book
section
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, side, section with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-service machines
  • computer stations
  • digital resources
  • book sections
  • fiction, non-fiction, reference
  • café area
  • repositioned
  • user preferences
  • management strategies
  • children's area
  • youth engagement
  • educational activities
  • meeting rooms
  • collaborative spaces
  • community events
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