The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of one country in 1960 and 2011.

The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of one country in 1960 and 2011.
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Presented in the given pies is information regarding the percentage of rubbish disposal in a nation between 1960 and 2011.
Overall
, there was
a
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upward trend in the
proportion
of disposed
waste
in
categories
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the categories
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of food, wood, plastic and metal, as opposed to the other categories. In
additon
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addition
, more paper
waste
was disposed
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the 1960s, but that later shifted to food
waste
throughout the period. In 1960,
paper
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was the most common type of
waste
in the surveyed country, accounting for a quarter of the total
proportion
, before drastically falling to 15% and getting dethroned by food
waste
in 2011, which
initially
stood at 12% and later rose to the highest point at 21%. Regarding wood and plastic, the
proportion
of
waste
in those categories began at 4% and 8%, after which the figures experienced a considerable increase to approximately double.
Similarly
, metal
waste
saw a marginal growth in its
proportion
, from 8% to 9%
at the end
of the period. Turning to the remaining statistics, a percentage
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17% was recorded for
textiles
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textile
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waste
in the beginning, prior to a minor decline
by
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6% in 2011. The same pattern was
also
true for other
waste
, which started at 12% before plummeting to one-third of that percentage. Meanwhile, both rubbish relating to glass and green
waste
remained stable during the given timescale, with respective figures standing at 5% and 9%.
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