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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views anf give your opinion

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Some
people
 believe that
children
 should start
school
 very soon .But the majority of
people
 claim that they should not go to
school
 until they are older.
It is clear that
 there are some advantages and some disadvantages in
this
 issue and I will explain both opinions ,
Although
 I agree that
children
 should not start
school
 at a very early age.
To begin
 with , some
peOple
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people
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 like their
children
go
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to go
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 to
school
 as soon as possible
due to
 explore their skills ,
such
 as arts
as well as
 maths.
moreover
 , their brains are fresh and they can learn everything at the same time
and
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apply
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it
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which
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 helps to improve their sociable lives when they have to multi-task.
Hence
 , they get ready for their lives and their jobs in future
at
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in
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 a short time.
On the other hand
 , some
people
 argue that
children
 should not go to
school
 until they are older. Since they think
children
 do not have enough abilities to do their
homeworks
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homework
.
Therefore
 , they may get hopeless and release their education. On the other side , they should play in
chilhood
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childhood
 and only enjoy
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their childhoods'
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childhoods'
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childhoods
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 period.
Thus
 , they must not engage
with
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in
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 education early. In my opinion , seven is an extraordinary age for starting
school
that is
 current in the majority of countries.so ,
children
 should not start early than
this
 age. On the ground that they can gain many skills from seven years old and
develope
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develop
developed
it
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them
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untill
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until
 the end of their academic education.
to sum up
 , there are different ideas about
this
 issue
that
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and
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 every idea has its own
advantage
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advantages
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 and disadvantages.
But
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However
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 I believe that it is not necessary for
children
 to start early their academic educations.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • social interactions
  • educational foundation
  • structured learning
  • emotional and psychological readiness
  • effective learning
  • cost-effective
  • childcare centers
  • explore their interests
  • creativity
  • love of learning
  • parental burden
  • economic considerations
  • childhood freedom
  • natural learning
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