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The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000.

The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000.
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The chart illustrates the usual everyday lovest and highest stages of air pollutants in four cities in 2000.
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 the typical day's smallest and largest points of SO2 in Calcutta and Beijing were higher than the figure for NO2.
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 the normal day-to-day least and greatest ranks of NO2 in Los Angeles and
Mexico
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City
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 were higher than that figure for SO2. Remarkably, the average daily minimum and maximum levels of SO2 and N20 in
Mexico
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City
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 were the highest. In
Mexico
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City
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, the usual everyday lowest and highest stages of SO2 were 80 and 200
micrograms
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 per m³, respectively.
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, these figures for Los Angeles were 2 and 10
micrograms
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 per m³, respectively. Regarding N20, the typical per day was smallest at 113
micrograms
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 per m³ and largest at 207
micrograms
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 per m³ in
Mexico
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City
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 and the figures for Los Angeles were minimum at 39
micrograms
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 per m3 and maximum at 104
micrograms
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 per m3. The typical day's smallest and largest points of Berging stood at 47 and 59
micrograms
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 per m3, respectively. these figures for NO2 were 30 and 52
micrograms
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 per m³, respectively.
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, the normal day-to-day least at 25
micrograms
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 per m³ and greatest at 100
micrograms
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 per m³ of SO2 In Calcutta. The average daily minimum and maximum levels of SO2 in Calcutta were 14 and 54
micrograms
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 per m³, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mexico, city, micrograms, m³ with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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