A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.
Hii Jill,
I am writing
this
letter in response to your letter on
suggesting you good place for a holiday that I recently visited. So Recently I went To Miami and Orlando In Florida, USA. It was winter here In the UK. It was Change preposition
apply
good
option to spend some time in Add an article
a good
Correct article usage
the summers
summers
season in Change the noun form
summer
USA
. The best thing about Florida here is that Correct article usage
the USA
weather
is always sunny.
I'd stayed at 5-star Correct article usage
the weather
resort
in Miami and Orlando. The accommodation is booked by my tour operator, The cost of accommodation is included in Fix the agreement mistake
resorts
Tour
package. The resort is comfortable and Correct article usage
the Tour
have
all Change the verb form
has
facilities
like Correct article usage
the facilities
swimming
pool, dining area and so on.
In Miami, Correct article usage
a swimming
,
there is Change the punctuation
apply
beach
where you can do Add an article
the beach
a beach
plethora
of activities like snorkelling, scuba diving, Add an article
a plethora
jet
skilling. You can almost spend your entire day on Correct word choice
and jet
beach
. Add an article
the beach
Whereas
, In Orlando
you can visit Disney Add a comma
Orlando,
land theme park
. The park is based On Correct your spelling
Land Theme Park
Disneyland
cartoon character theme, Your children will definitely enjoy spending time there. As there is Correct article usage
a Disneyland
plethora
of activities Add an article
a plethora
can
be done by children. The food is good as there are lots of Correct pronoun usage
that can
Fix the agreement mistake
options
option
Fix the agreement mistake
options
Change preposition
for
in
Change preposition
for
Correct article usage
the lunch
lunch
, Correct article usage
the lunch
Correct word choice
and dinner
dinner
Correct word choice
and dinner
Fix the agreement mistake
menus
menu
like Indian, continental, Thai and so on.
I hope my suggestion will help in planning Fix the agreement mistake
menus
holiday
for your family.
Warm wishes,
JamesAdd an article
a holiday
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You have provided a complete response by including all the required details about the destination, accommodation, activities, and food.
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The writing tone is friendly and suitable for addressing a friend, making your letter sound genuine and personal.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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