A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say -where you went, -Where you stayed, -What you can do there and what the food was like.

Hii Jill, I am writing
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suggesting you good place for a holiday that I recently visited. So Recently I went To Miami and Orlando In Florida, USA. It was winter here In the UK. It was
good
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option to spend some time in
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the summers
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summers
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season in
USA
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. The best thing about Florida here is that
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is always sunny. I'd stayed at 5-star
resort
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resorts
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in Miami and Orlando. The accommodation is booked by my tour operator, The cost of accommodation is included in
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package. The resort is comfortable and
have
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all
facilities
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the facilities
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like
swimming
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pool, dining area and so on. In Miami,
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there is
beach
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the beach
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where you can do
plethora
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a plethora
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of activities like snorkelling, scuba diving,
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skilling. You can almost spend your entire day on
beach
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the beach
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.
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, In
Orlando
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Orlando,
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you can visit Disney
land theme park
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Land Theme Park
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. The park is based On
Disneyland
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a Disneyland
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cartoon character theme, Your children will definitely enjoy spending time there. As there is
plethora
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a plethora
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of activities
can
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be done by children. The food is good as there are lots of
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option
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in
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the lunch
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lunch
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the lunch
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,
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and dinner
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dinner
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and dinner
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menus
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menu
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like Indian, continental, Thai and so on. I hope my suggestion will help in planning
holiday
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a holiday
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for your family. Warm wishes, James
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You have provided a complete response by including all the required details about the destination, accommodation, activities, and food.
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The writing tone is friendly and suitable for addressing a friend, making your letter sound genuine and personal.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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