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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided bar chart illustrates information pertaining to the
production
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 of
rice
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 every year in four different nations between 1995 and 2015. It can
also
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 be noted that the measurements were estimated in million tonnes (
MT
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).
Overall
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, the annual
rice
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production
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 in countries A, B, and D experienced an upward trend,
whereas
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country
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 C fluctuation throughout the time scale.
Additionally
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, the most massive
production
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 of
rice
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 was recorded in
country
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 A during the period. Looking at the statistics for the annually produced
rice
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 in
country
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 A, it rose significantly from exactly 45MT in 2005 to 50MT in 2015.
Similarly
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, the annual
rice
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production
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 of nation B nearly doubled to roughly 44MT in 2010 from more than 25MT at the beginning,
however
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,
this
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 number decreased slightly to approximately 36MT in the final year.
In contrast
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, there was a dissimilar trend in
country
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 D, where the annual
production
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 of
rice
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 remained constant at a mere 2.5MT during the first five years, before doubling to exactly 5MT by 2015.
However
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,
country
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 C was the only one had its annual
rice
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production
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 remained constant throughout the time frame. Specifically, it saw a small increase to roughly 6MT from exactly 5MT between 2005 and 2010, after that,
this
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 figure decreased to 5
MT
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at the end
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, the same as the beginning.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, rice, mt, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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