The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures
provides
information about Change the verb form
provide
comparison
of Correct article usage
a comparison
police
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the police
budget
's sources and portion
of Add an article
a portion
the portion
police's
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police
budget
spending between 2017 - 2018 in one region of Britain. In summarize
, there Replace the word
summary
is
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was
increase
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an increase
the increase
of
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in
police
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the police
budget
and changes of
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in
spending
Correct article usage
the spending
portion
in 2018.
Based on the table information, police
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the police
budget
rise
from Replace the word
rose
GBP
304,7 Million
into
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to
GBP
318,6 Million
in 2018, contributed
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contributing
from
the surge of every Change preposition
to
sources
. The National Government, which has Change to a singular noun
source
biggest
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the biggest
portion
, increase
their contribution from Wrong verb form
increased
GBP
175,5 Milion
Correct your spelling
million
into
177,8 Change preposition
to
Milion
followed by funds from Local Taxes that Correct your spelling
Million
hike
from Verb problem
increased
GBP
91,2 Million
to GBP
102,3 Million
and other sources financing
, Change preposition
of financing
such
as grants, slightly increase
from Wrong verb form
increased
GBP
38 Million
to GBP
38,5 Million
.
Then
, spending
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the spending
propotion
of Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
police
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the police
budget
also
changed in 2018. Wages expense remains take
the dominant Verb problem
apply
portion
, but the spending was fell
from 75% of Change the verb form
fell
total
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the total
budget
on
2017 Change preposition
in
into
69% Change preposition
to
on
2018. Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, technology spending was increase
from 8% of Wrong verb form
increased
total
Add an article
the total
budget
into
14% of Change preposition
to
total
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the total
budget
on
2018. Change preposition
in
Accomodation
expense, Correct your spelling
Accommodation
that
consists of buildings and transport, remains stable Correct pronoun usage
which
on
17% of Change preposition
at
total
Add an article
the total
budget
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