The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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provides
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information about
comparison
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of
police
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the police
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budget
's sources and
portion
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a portion
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of
police's
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police
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budget
spending between 2017 - 2018 in one region of Britain. In
summarize
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, there
is
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increase
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an increase
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of
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in
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police
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the police
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budget
and changes
of
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spending
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the spending
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portion
in 2018. Based on the table information,
police
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the police
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budget
rise
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from
GBP
304,7
Million
into
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GBP
318,6
Million
in 2018,
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from
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the surge of every
sources
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. The National Government, which has
biggest
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portion
,
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their contribution from
GBP
175,5
Milion
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million
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into
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177,8
Milion
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followed by funds from Local Taxes that
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increased
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from
GBP
91,2
Million
to
GBP
102,3
Million
and other sources
financing
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,
such
as grants, slightly
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from
GBP
38
Million
to
GBP
38,5
Million
.
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,
spending
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propotion
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proportion
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of
police
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budget
also
changed in 2018. Wages expense remains
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the dominant
portion
, but the spending
was fell
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from 75% of
total
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budget
on
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2017
into
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69%
on
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in
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2018.
On the other hand
, technology spending was
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from 8% of
total
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budget
into
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14% of
total
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the total
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budget
on
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in
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2018.
Accomodation
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expense,
that
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consists of buildings and transport, remains stable
on
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at
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17% of
total
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the total
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budget
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, portion, increase, gbp, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.

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