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The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.

The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of renewable
energy
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 in the total
energy
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 supply in Australia, Sweden,
Iceland
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 and Turkey between 1997 and 2010.
Overall
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, the proportion of renewable
energy
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 in the total
energy
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 supply in Sweden and
Iceland
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 increased
while
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 the figure for Australia and Turkey decreased. Remarkably, the figure for
Iceland
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 was the highest compared to other countries. In 1997, the proportion of renewable
energy
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 in the total
energy
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 supply in
Iceland
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 accounted for about 45% and grew to 60% in 2000.
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, it peaked at 70%
at the end
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 of the period.
However
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, there was only 7% of renewable
energy
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 in total
energy
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 supply in Sweden in 1997 before climbing to about 9% in 2010. Regarding Australia, its percentage of renewable
energy
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 in total
energy
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 supply witnessed a light decline from about 9% to only 5% over the period shown, it
also
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 was the lowest figure in comparison with the other three nations.
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, there was about 38% of renewable
energy
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 in the total
energy
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 supply in Turkey in 1997, which was followed by a fluctuation and drop to about 33%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, iceland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • renewable energy
  • total energy supply
  • percentage
  • overall
  • changed
  • increases
  • decreases
  • fluctuating
  • trend
  • highest
  • lowest
  • significant
  • commitment
  • sustainability
  • environmental protection
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