The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years.

The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years.
The chart illustrates the
figure
for
films
produced in five countries from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the number of
films
produced in A and D decreased
while
the
figure
for B and C increased. Remarkably, the
figure
for A country was the highest compared to the other four countries. In 2007, there were 90
films
produced in A and
this
dropped to 80
films
produced
at the end
of the period. Regarding D, the number of
films
produced in 2007 was about 13
films
.
This
figure
witnessed a fluctuation and fall to about 11
films
Additionally
, B produced 50
films
in 2007 before booming to 10
films
in 2009. there were only 8
films
produced in C at the beginning of the period and climbed to about 18
films
in 2009.
Finally
, E stood at about 10
films
produced in 2007, which was followed by a slight growth to over 10
films
in 2009, It was the lowest
figure
in comparison with four other countries
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