The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years.
The chart illustrates the
figure
for films
produced in five countries from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of films
produced in A and D decreased while
the figure
for B and C increased. Remarkably, the figure
for A country was the highest compared to the other four countries.
In 2007, there were 90 films
produced in A and this
dropped to 80 films
produced at the end
of the period. Regarding D, the number of films
produced in 2007 was about 13 films
. This
figure
witnessed a fluctuation and fall to about 11 films
Additionally
, B produced 50 films
in 2007 before booming to 10 films
in 2009. there were only 8 films
produced in C at the beginning of the period and climbed to about 18 films
in 2009. Finally
, E stood at about 10 films
produced in 2007, which was followed by a slight growth to over 10 films
in 2009, It was the lowest figure
in comparison with four other countriesSubmitted by writingeilts on
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