in the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.
For the next years, all
of
four Change preposition
apply
tires
vehicles will be Fix the agreement mistake
tire
drive
by Change the form of the verb
driven
autopilot
Correct article usage
an autopilot
system
and many people
could use the cars
without driving it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
This
future technology
will benefit Change preposition
apply
to
Change preposition
apply
people
such
as
Correct your spelling
an
Correct article usage
an easier
easier
driving experience and Correct article usage
an easier
Wrong verb form
cut
cutting
Wrong verb form
cut
the
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apply
cost
for the driver. In my opinion, there are more disadvantages than Fix the agreement mistake
costs
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apply
the
advantages because Correct article usage
apply
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they
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
have
Change the verb form
has
high
risk Add an article
a high
Change preposition
of
for
auto Change preposition
of
Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
accident
and less Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
Change preposition
apply
of
responsibility for the Change preposition
apply
passengers
Correct pronoun usage
themselves
itself
.
Correct pronoun usage
themselves
Firstly
, this
automation
vehicle related to Replace the word
automated
technology
will bring benefit to people
that
do not have Correct pronoun usage
who
ability
to Change the article
the ability
drive
or not
in Add a missing verb
are not
the
fit health condition. So for Correct article usage
a
this
kind of people
, it will makes
Change the verb form
make
easier
Correct pronoun usage
it easier
to
them to Change preposition
for
drive
the
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apply
cars
without real drive
experience. Replace the word
driving
For example
, if people
in
Add a missing verb
are in
the
sick and sleepy Correct article usage
apply
condition
, Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
they
Correct pronoun usage
their
cars
might be able to drive
it self
without Correct your spelling
itself
controlling
and they can take Replace the word
control
a
rest in the car without driving the Correct article usage
apply
cars
. Consequently
, this
also
lead
to Change the verb form
leads
reduce
the need for the driver and cutting the cost for the driver itself. Change the verb form
reducing
However
, how far the automation
driving technology
can protect the passengers
?
Aside from the benefits, i
think Change the capitalization
I
this
autopilot
technology
will have high
risk Add an article
a high
for
auto Change preposition
of
accident
because thave a big chance Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
to
sudden Change preposition
of
error
related to the Fix the agreement mistake
errors
system
. The error
will be hard to avoided
because the Change the form of the verb
avoid
automation
not
give the Add a missing verb
does not
passengers
to control or avoid it. If it comes to the
transportation, Correct article usage
apply
accident
sometimes happen Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
for
Change preposition
apply
sudden
. Change the word
suddenly
For example
, sometimes sudden
hit from Correct article usage
a sudden
another
Replace the adjective
another car
other cars
cars
will happen, if the system
cannot detect this
, it will leads
to Change the verb form
lead
sudden
Correct article usage
a sudden
error
that harming
the Wrong verb form
harms
passengers
life. Another Change to a genitive case
passenger's
passengers'
disadvantages
is the lack of the Replace the adjective
disadvantage
passengers
responsibility to operate the Change to a genitive case
passenger's
passengers'
cars
. As a result
, if the error
comes from the autopilot
system
like a sudden stop, that will make
traffic or Verb problem
cause
accident
in the
unpredicted way. Obviously, the Change the article
an
passengers
will have an argument that they not operate the cars
, it is all because
the mistake from the Add the preposition
because of
autopilot
machine. But, how
if the accidents make the victims? who is to blame? because Correct word choice
what
the
Change preposition
of the
automation
system
, we can not blame the passengers
.
To conclude
, autopilot related
vehicles will bring benefits to Add a hyphen
autopilot-related
people
, but somehow the disadvantages will lead to risking other people
lives and harming others.Change noun form
people's
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