The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts showed how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and pie charts provide information on the
police
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budget
for 2017 and 2018 in Britain. The table describes the sources of the Use synonyms
budget
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while
the table charts illustrate how it was allocated.
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Overall
, in both years, salaries accounted for the largest proportion of the Linking Words
budget
. Spending on buildings and transport remained constant, Use synonyms
while
the allocation for technology increased. Linking Words
Additionally
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overall
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police
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budget
saw an increase in 2018.
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to the data in more detail, the largest source of the Correct your spelling
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police
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budget
in both years was the National Government, with a figure of £175.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2017, increasing to £177.8 Use synonyms
million
in 2018. Local taxes followed the second-largest source, providing £91.2 Use synonyms
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in 2017 and £102.3 Use synonyms
million
in 2018. Other sources contributed £38 Use synonyms
million
in 2017, slightly increasing to £38.5 Use synonyms
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in 2018. Use synonyms
As a result
, the total Linking Words
police
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budget
grew from £304.7 Use synonyms
million
in 2017 to £318.6 Use synonyms
million
in 2018.
Regarding expenditure, in 2017, salaries accounted Use synonyms
one-fourth
of the Change preposition
for one-fourth
budget
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transport, and technology received 17% and 8% respectively. Correct word choice
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In contrast
, in 2018, the proportion of the Linking Words
budget
spent on salaries decreased to 69%, Use synonyms
while
the allocation for technology increased to 14%. Interestingly, spending on buildings and transport remained unchanged at 17% in 2018.Linking Words
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