The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagrams illustrate the design of a house based on climate characteristics that are divided into warm and cool climates. In general, each layout consists of
insulation
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parts and
windows
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as well but they have different functions following the climate conditions.
First,
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the building design for a cool climate house is covered with thermal building material with a high-angled
roof
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. On the outside, the building will be coated with
insulation
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part reduce the loss of hot temperature so it would maintain the warmth inside the building.
Then
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, the sunlight would be directed to the floor to keep the warmth.
In contrast
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, the house layout for warm climates puts the
insulation
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part on the top paired with reflective
roof
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material to reduce the high temperatures and
also
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equips by overhang
roof
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to decrease sunlight exposure.
Furthermore
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, it has more
windows
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located on each side to increase the airflow inside the building. During the afternoon, the hot temperature would be reduced by the
insulation
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part and reflective material on the top
also
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through the addition of an overhang
roof
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with closed
windows
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.
On the other hand
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, during the night,
windows
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were opened to enhance the airflow which would reduce the temperature inside.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words insulation, windows, roof with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • thermal mass
  • insulation
  • ventilation
  • draft
  • heat dissipation
  • exposure to sunlight
  • extended eaves
  • overhangs
  • reflective materials
  • south-facing
  • north-facing
  • porches
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