You are planning to give a party at home. You want to cook a meal for this party and decided to ask a friend for a recipe from his/her country. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -Tell the friend why you are giving this party -Explain why you want a recipe from his/her country -Invite your friend to the party

#party #home #cook #friend #recipe #country #-tell #-explain #-invite

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Dear Deema, I hope

your

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you're

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doing great, I'

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writing

this

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letter to ask you about a Sushi recipe that we used to

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eat

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ate

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eat

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when I visited you

last

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time. I'

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planning to have a party at my home to celebrate "Japan International Day" and I will invite all my

Japanes

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Japanese

friends and enjoy

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ourselves togather

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togather

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together

. I know that

the

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apply

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Sushi is one of the traditional foods at Jaban ,

thats

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why I decided to have it as our meal.

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, I remember how the way you cooked it was yummy. So I'

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sure that

every one

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in the party would like it.

Ofcourse

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Of course

you are invited to the party and I would be very happy if you

can

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join us. It will be in the 5th of April at 5p.

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Please replay as soon as possible, thank you

nouf

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noun

Best wishes,

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task achievement

Pay attention to grammar and spelling. For instance, 'your' should be 'you're', and 'Jaban' should be 'Japan'.

coherence cohesion

Ensure clear paragraph separation for different ideas. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea.

task achievement

The letter clearly addresses the purpose, with a warm invitation extended to the friend.

suitable writing tone

The tone is friendly and engaging, suitable for a letter to a friend.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

141 words

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