You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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The given line graph is a figure revealing data about the amount of abroad
students
and native Use synonyms
students
in universities in Australia over 10 Use synonyms
years
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the line shows that in the beginning, the amount of commencing overseas Linking Words
students
and local Use synonyms
students
was the lowest and over the Use synonyms
years
increased. Use synonyms
While
the amount of total local Linking Words
students
was more than the total overseas Use synonyms
students
, in the beginning.
as the graph shows, the commencing of local Use synonyms
students
was under 20000 in 2001 and it had a slight increase to just over 20000, in 2002. Use synonyms
while
the same trend in abroad Linking Words
students
gradually increased until 2008, in 40000.
Use synonyms
Similarly
, the trend of total overseas Linking Words
students
and local Use synonyms
students
experienced a significant rise during 10 Use synonyms
years
and reached 80000 and 600000, respectively. Use synonyms
However
, the total number of native Linking Words
students
Use synonyms
were
witnessed a higher figure, between 20001 and 2010, and was exactly 6 times more. Unnecessary verb
apply
Although
it was stable for 4 Linking Words
years
, from 2006 until 2010.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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